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--- character:danny_hanley_lewis [2017/05/10 07:28] – rounded off luca
+++ character:danny_hanley_lewis [2017/05/12 11:54] (current) – [Skills] change of language luca
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 === Communications [Advanced] ===
-His mind is surprisingly plasticine in understanding new languages, and he can learn the pidgin of an unfamiliar language after spending a few weeks amongst native speakers. Robert seems to be unable to take advantage of this however.
+Danny's mind is surprisingly plasticine in understanding new languages, and he can learn the pidgin of an unfamiliar language after spending a few weeks amongst native speakers. Robert seems to be unable to take advantage of this however.
 === Firearms [Intermediate] ===
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 === Piloting [Intermediate] ===
-Danny can pilot light and ultralight spacecraft, and knows the standard procedures and checks, as well as some aerobatics. Robert is also a capable pilot for similar craft.
+Danny can pilot light and ultralight spacecraft, and knows the standard docking and launch procedures, pre-flight checks, and aerobatics. Robert is also a capable pilot for similar craft, and remarkably aggressive if he can find an advantage.
 === Repair [Intermediate] ===
-Though his repair skills were a back seat to his killing skills, Danny had to ply himself to keep the Herald running once it landed in the new world with Robert. The crash course on kludging upskilled him considerably, and lets him try his hand at kludging a fix for any system - documentation on hand or not.
+Though his repair skills were a back seat to his killing skills, Danny had to ply himself to keep the Herald running once it landed in the new world with Robert. The crash course on the ship involved kludging fixes for a variety of starship systems, with no additional resources, and an encrypted operations documentation.
 === Basic Skills ===
-  * **Physical** - Tries his best to stay in shape, to remain flexible and supple.
+  * **Fitness** - Tries his best to stay in shape in order to remain flexible and supple.
-  * **Senses** - Is sensitive to psionic phenomena thanks to his abnormal mental situation.
+  * **Senses** - Is sensitive to psionic phenomena due to his abnormal mental situation.
   * **Starship Operation** - Was given a week-long course for the intricacies of the LSDF Herald.
-  * **Gunner** - Can use the guns on most light spacecraft.
+  * **Gunner** - Can point and shoot the guns on most light spacecraft.
 ===== Inventory =====